{"id":6494,"date":"2021-12-02T19:31:41","date_gmt":"2021-12-03T01:31:41","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.daveomeara.com\/home\/?p=6494"},"modified":"2022-03-07T07:12:33","modified_gmt":"2022-03-07T13:12:33","slug":"notas-sobre-primero-sueno-first-dream-vv-1-24","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.daveomeara.com\/home\/6494\/","title":{"rendered":"Notas sobre Primero Sue\u00f1o (First Dream) vv 1-24"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.daveomeara.com\/home\/6473#translation\">Esta traducci\u00f3n<\/a> comenz\u00f3 como una chuleta para ayudarme a memorizar <a href=\"https:\/\/www.daveomeara.com\/home\/6473#original\">estos versos<\/a>, que me parecen parte de uno de los poemas m\u00e1s notables jam\u00e1s escritos.&nbsp; Cuando empec\u00e9 a vivir con estos versos, a\u00f1adiendo poco a poco uno por d\u00eda a mis rituales de memoria, a medida que las palabras se convert\u00edan cada vez m\u00e1s en una parte de la estructura r\u00edtmica de mi mundo (esto es lo que siempre ocurre cuando memorice un poema que resulta valer la pena), me encontr\u00e9 revisando la hoja de ayuda intentando que capturara al menos un poco de la extra\u00f1a belleza del original. A veces quer\u00eda aclarar la sintaxis, a menudo dif\u00edcil (\u00bfcu\u00e1l es el sujeto de este verbo?), sin perder los salvajes cambios de im\u00e1genes, la l\u00f3gica on\u00edrica impresionista unida a la cosmolog\u00eda barroca.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<!--more-->\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Mi primera elecci\u00f3n lleg\u00f3 con la primera palabra del poema: <em>piramidal<\/em>. La palabra se escribe exactamente igual en espa\u00f1ol y en ingl\u00e9s, pero las pronunciaciones son enormemente diferentes: en espa\u00f1ol, con el fuerte acento en la s\u00edlaba final, <em>pyramiDAL <\/em>es rica, sonora y autoritaria; en ingl\u00e9s, la palabra termina con un sonido de degluci\u00f3n, como si el hablante hubiera pensado de repente que es mejor no intentar convertir la palabra <em>pyramid <\/em>en un adjetivo. 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